Oh man. Writing fight scenes is both difficult and fun. I know I definitely need some work to make this scene I worked on today much more badass, but I’m so pleased with it so far. 😀
Excerpt:
With speed that could not come from a human, Cira twisted Guinivere’s arm back. There was a sickening crack and Guinivere squealed out a husky cry, but Cira wasn’t finished yet. She grabbed Guinivere’s hair in her other hand and yanked her close so she could whisper in her ear.
Elias didn’t hear what she said, but he saw the look of terror that crossed Guinivere’s face for an instant.
Then, Cira threw her to the ground so hard she left a rut in the dirt.
Writerly Things 